Playbook, furniture retailer

Money down at the start, money due before it moves, and a wasted van

Two quite different charges get filed together under this heading. One is the deposit that puts a piece into production and the balance that has to clear before it leaves the warehouse, which is the ordinary shape of a furniture order. The other is what happens when a booked delivery fails: two people and a vehicle were committed to a window and the address was empty, or the piece would not go in, and somebody carries the cost of that.

Why this is not the general answer

The handling pattern for deposits and no-show fees holds across every trade. What follows is the part that does not.

  • The deposit here is not a holding fee on a booking. It commits a production slot and often a cut length of cloth, which is why its treatment on a cancellation looks nothing like a deposit anywhere else.
  • The balance falls due before despatch rather than on the doorstep, so a finished piece can sit in a warehouse held by a payment request nobody noticed.
  • A missed delivery consumes two people, a vehicle and a window in a diary that was closed to other orders, which is why a failed delivery charge exists at all and why it reflects a real cost rather than a penalty.
  • A delivery refused at the door because the piece arrived damaged is not a missed delivery, and terms that do not separate the two produce an argument with a customer who did exactly the right thing.

How it arrives

  • how much deposit do i need to put down
  • when do i pay the rest of it
  • i missed the delivery is there a charge
  • nobody was in when the crew came
  • i had to refuse the delivery at the door what happens now
  • is there a charge to rebook the delivery

What has to be indexed for this to work

Material behind this answer
What the deposit commits, and when it stops being returnableWhat it buys, the point in production it becomes non returnable, and how it is set against the balance. Customers read a deposit as a holding fee, and in this trade it usually buys a slot and a length of cloth.
When the balance is due, and what happens if it is not paidHow far ahead of despatch, how you ask for it, and whether a finished piece is held or a slot released when it does not arrive. The held order is the outcome nobody sees coming.
Your failed delivery terms, split by causeNobody in, no access on the day, and a refusal at the door for damage, treated separately and priced separately if at all. One charge covering all three reads as punishing somebody for refusing a damaged item.
How a redelivery is arranged and what it costsThe wait to the next run in that area and any charge. The wait usually hurts more than the charge does, and hearing it early is better than discovering it.

The reply

A reply worth copying
The deposit and the balance work as two stages: the deposit goes down when the order is placed and commits the production slot, and the balance falls due before the piece leaves the warehouse rather than on the day it arrives [1]. That second part surprises people, and it matters, because a finished piece can sit in the warehouse waiting on it. On a missed delivery, our terms set out what applies, and they treat nobody being in differently from a delivery refused at the door because the item arrived damaged [2]. Refusing damage at the door is the right thing to do and it is not a no show. I cannot see your order or any charge on it, so if you need to know what applies to yours, leave your name, the email on the order and your order number.

The two stages are given in order because the customer's mental model is a single payment at the end. Naming the held order as the consequence is what makes the balance timing land rather than sounding like small print. Separating a refusal for damage from a missed slot, unprompted, is the sentence that stops somebody accepting a damaged piece because they were frightened of a charge.

Where it stops

The trigger. The visitor asks what a charge on their order is, disputes a failed delivery fee, or wants to know whether their deposit can come back.

The handover, worded
I cannot see charges or make a decision about one. Leave your name, the email on the order, your order number and what happened on the day, and the team will look at it and come back to you.

It stops answering before it guesses, says who will pick it up, and asks for the one thing that makes a reply possible. Nothing about it reads as a dead end.

Never say this here

Out of bounds

  • Never say a deposit is returnable, or that it is not, on a particular order, because it turns on how far the piece has gone into production.
  • Never confirm that a failed delivery charge does or does not apply to somebody, which is a decision made by a person who knows what the crew found at the address.
  • Never discourage a customer from refusing a damaged delivery at the door by implying it might be charged for.
  • Never say a redelivery will be soon, since it waits for the next run in that area and that can be weeks away.

Questions

Should the failed delivery charge be published at all?
Yes, and split by cause. An unpublished charge that appears afterwards is a complaint every single time. A published one with the reasons separated is understood, because the customer can picture the two people and the van behind it.
Can it tell somebody whether they will be charged?
No. It cannot see the order, the delivery notes or what happened at the address. It states what the terms say and hands over, which is the only honest position when there is money resting on the answer.
Why is the balance timing worth writing down?
Because an order finished and held in a warehouse over a payment request nobody saw is the most avoidable delay in the trade. One sentence at the point of order about when the balance is asked for prevents it entirely.

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